Cream AND Cheese

Who wants a wad with just Cream? Well now cheese is with her!

CREDIT TO BLADE for cream
CREDIT TO ME for cheese addon

Screens:






http://srb2ffh.supersanctuary.net/656creamandcheese.wad

ok ok i have cream

not fine

Can I have a little critizism? Whats good? Whats bad? I dont know unless you tell me so I cant do anything to make it better.

great a cat

Thanks.

Okay, despite shadonic being no help. Allow me to elaborate on what I think.

I believe that this WAD has a lot of potential. It does capture the way that cream first appeared to us all: with a fluttering blue sidekick that forced itself into combat for the benefit of its pacifist master. While that cant exactly be recreated, chees following her can. The sprites themselves are good, you borrowed cream from blade (with his permission, I expect) and the cheese you added in looks nice as well. The execution...not so well. when I was playing the WAD, I noticed an obvious shake in the sprites, particularly in the running frames. I don't really even mind that cheese switches sides with cream, but the shaking just kills the WAD, considering it looks like she's stuck in the ground.

My suggestion to you is to check your sprites again, and make sure they are all properly aligned. The two lines that you see in your WAD editor are there for centering and a notification as to where the ground is. Check this, maybe fix it, And then you may have a winner on your hands.

Oh YA! Thank you! I've been looking for a Cream with Cheese wad for ages but never could seem to find one! Can't wait to try this out!